托福独立写作举例类型有哪些?
我们可以简单提出几种举例子的类型,以免大家在独立写作中都晒出“大表哥”LOL
个人的例子确实是独立写作在每一个支持段中举例子的首选,基于普通考生一般会写2-3个支持段,所以每一个支持段都要举例子的话,我们建议只在一个支持段中编造个人的例子会比较好,其它两个支持段就不是很建议都是“个人”例子了,因为要避免重复和刻板化。
接下来我会给大家一些支持段的示范。
1.个人的例子主要指的是如某个朋友,亲戚,名人的事件,需要点名道姓,把这个人的所作所为在50-70字说清楚,不需要例举这个人的一生,而是把他身上能体现今天文章主题的内容陈述清楚即可。例如:
题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers aremore appreciated now than they were in the past.
示范:不同意
In addition, teachers are not the only wayin which people obtain academic knowledge. 此处省略展开3-4句解释分论点+For instance,my cousin Jack, a senior high school student, usually searches physics coursesonline in order to make up for what she does not understand in the class ratherthan asking teachers. In this way, she studies in a high efficiency with thehelp of the internet access, and clearly, the exclusiveness of teachers nolonger exists today.
2.我们还可以写数据+复数人称当主语的例子,数据例子大家都不陌生,编造一个官方机构,给出一个较为客观的数据即可。这时候往往会觉得字数过少,因此我建议可以在数据例子后面加上一个复数人称当做主语的群体例子,例子描述一个具体事情作为例子叠加;或者,我们也可以在数据例子后面具体点明在这个数据中,有多少人车持有什么观点,增加真实性。例如:
题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universitiesshould invest more money on famous teachers rather than advanced devices.
示范:同意
First of all, famous teachers can win moreattraction of students.此处省略展开3-4句解释分论点+For example, Harvard University get thousands of applicationletters every year from all over the world, and the most important reason isthat there are many great professors, especially in chemistry and psychologydepartment. A recent research in Reuters claimed that over 65% of applicantswere into the famous teaching resource of Harvard, some of whom also airedtheir admiration for professors and doctors who have published many patents andthesis in certain areas. Therefore, the high popularity of famous teachers in auniversity benefits the enrollment.
3.如果我们想写反衬的例子,也就是通过黑反方来支持正方,可以选择写“假设”的例子,这样就不会不礼貌地揭露他人的隐私。模板句型如下:
l Just imagine what would be like if…
l It is not hard to consider a situation that…
l Suppose a condition that…
题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universitiesshould prepare students for the workplace.
示范:不同意
First of all, preparing students for theworkplace may restrain their potentials. 此处省略展开3-4句解释分论点+Justimagine a student who is good at people interaction is however prepared by hisuniversity to learn accounting. As a result, he may not be satisfied with hiswork as an accountant in a company and also waste his talent in communication.Instead, if he could learn more comprehensive skills according to personalfeatures, he would make a name in other areas such as human resource.
4.最后一种介绍给大家的是排比的例子类型,因为ETS会觉得能写出名词,动词,或者句子的三个同样形式连用的考生更有语言能力,大家在这个类型中可以量力而为,因为不是所有题都能写三个句子,每一个句子描述一个事情,三个句子就是三个例子的叠加来支持你的分论点。
题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Politicalleaders bring more benefit to the society than entertainers do.
示范:同意
First of all, political leaders can benefitthe society on each aspect than great artists do. 此处省略展开3-4句解释分论点+Forinstance, when a country witnesses economic crisis, political leaders areones who figure out solutions to help people out of economic loss; whenunemployment rate is too high in a country, political leaders offer moreworking positions; when people meet difficulty in seeing doctors, politicalleaders make policies in healthcare.
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