托福综合写作题目：帝国崩溃的原因

　　本文托福综合写作题目为帝国崩溃的原因2016年3 月13日托福考试写作

托福综合写作范文Topic 议题： the reason of collapse of Akkadine Empire
	Reading	Listening
Sub-point 1 分论点1	Rebellion of conquered city	Conquered cities have little chance to rebel, for their walls have been destroyed by empire army. They are easily defeated again.
Sub-point2 分论点2	Bad weather results in shortage of food supply.	Indeed, bad weather will lead to the reduction of food supply, but farmers in empire have advanced irrigation technology, which can bring water from long distance. What’s more, farmers will preserve grains.
Sub-point 3 分论点3	Unfair trade leads to discontent of other countries. They united to fight against the Empire.	Empire has been looking for new partners. Losses caused by some countries can be made up by resources and benefits from new countries.

　　托福综合写作范文Sample answer:

　　The writer and the speaker have a debate on what cause the collapse of Akkadine Empire. The writer puts forward three reasons, which are opposed by the following lecture.

　　First, the writer claims that the collapse of empire is cause by rebellion of conquered cities. While the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle, according to him/her, Conquered cities have little chance to rebel, for their walls have been destroyed by empire army. They are easily defeated again.

　　Secondly, the passage states that bad weather results in shortage of food supply. However, the speaker casts doubt on this opinion by saying that Indeed, bad weather will lead to the reduction of food supply, but farmers in empire have advanced irrigation technology, which can bring water from long distance. What’s more, farmers will preserve grains.

　　Last, the writer argues that unfair trade leads to discontent of other countries. They united to fight against the Empire. By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, this claim does not hold water. Empire has been looking for new partners. Losses caused by some countries can be made up by resources and benefits from new countries.